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Mohammad
really want to see your latest version now..
The drawings are great., especially the last page with diagrams and small sketches and touches of colour.
Looking here at your plan, the water elements are still very diagrammatic, and your relationship with the lane is still weak.
I find this a fascinating project, but you need to find ways to draw it that capture some of the difference and intrigue. Plans could do with projection lines (what is above). Perhaps a roof plan would help.. Shadows might be a good trick
— Ammon Beyerle
I still think the central spaces underground need a lot more work. There are some issues around where you circulate/arrive, what you see and how you feel that are still conceptual, but not delivering yet.
— Ammon Beyerle