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Melissa, lovely plan, the hatching of the earth gives it a great quality. You need to get much more specific and focussed on the interior spaces though, the long section here is a start, but you could be much more expressive and experimental at this stage.
Again, good entrance from Flinders, but then can you do similar perspectives from other places? I would suspect it to put into question other parts of the project.
I'd like to see some redesign, breaking it apart a little, just for a few days or a week. It might add a new layer, or give these ones more presence.
— Ammon Beyerle
The perspective is very good.
— Ammon Beyerle