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Where are your new drawings!??

i particularly like the juxtaposition of the hole with the unbalanced objects, it gives the composition a dynamism that is important for this space. I think, looking at this symmetry is almost something to blend in, where asymmetry offers a point of attention.

Drawings? These are good and clear but you are not at all capturing the atmosphere. Do some tests, try some different techniques then choose one to redraw this.

— Ammon Beyerle
I will put up my 3rd revision drawings from last week the ones that were for Richard to comment on... they are CAD though because I don't happen to have a huge scanner at home to scan in the version with hand drawing over the top!
— Lauren