Interim Review Panels


Hello,
 
I've attached my panels from the interim review.  Also, I found some T-squares upstairs and worked out somewhat of a makeshift drafting table for myself.  I can show anybody if they would like.  Please feel free to comment on these drawings...I would love the feedback.
 
Ryan

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Ryan, pretty much everything has been said last class. I'd like to encourage you to play more with these mood-perspectives. I imagine a large panel of one of these drawings, the atmosphere might be really a hero-shot. To get to this quality you need to draw it a few more times, and play more with the technique.
I'm concerned the light wells are still only a gimmick-diagram. Look at precedents! There are so many amazing things you could do with a light well.
Drawing is going well, but I'm dying to get inside and feel the project at a more human scale. It is still too careful at this stage!
— Ammon Beyerle
Ryan, really want to see your next version of this ASAP!
— Ammon Beyerle